![]() Galatea hooked us in and I think you'll find people will actually google you to find your book elsewhere if you publish. Please consider publishing your books via Amazon or another platform. When I get a new phone in a few weeks, I will lose the chapters I have unless I keep reading it on my old phone. I cringed at the idea of paying $60 for a college textbook years ago and would never pay it for a fiction book unless it is a rare book. To read the entire book, I would either need to pay over $60 or wait 180 days. However, the fact that readers get maybe a 1/4 of a chapter each day is frustrating. The platform realized the blurb for your book would hook people in and the writing is actually good! It's no surprise your book is one of the top sellers and the profits for the app from this book alone is over $1 million! You made the app worth the creators time. First off, I hope that your share of the profits from Galatea is substantial enough to cover your schooling (I read about that in an article). I'm not sure if the author even comes here because she has probably heard this many times. Overall this book is a garbage fire, and there is no amount of post-release editing in the world that could save it. She was the ultimate African-American mama-bear.” Not to mention moments of casual ableism and slut-shaming. Like someone’s girlfriend she describes as being “black, short and round, with wild dark locks and big, dark eyes. But wait there’s more! Get ready for some casual racism as the main character describes any POC she comes across. It happens, she’s saved halfway through, she has a cry about it and then the next day is fine, it’s never brought up, or discussed again (except for her to think how great of a guy her lover is because he saved her from it). But to top it all off, almost every sex scene reads a bit like sexual assault as she always tells him to stop and get off her, and some even have her crying!īut wait there’s more! The book doesn’t just stop at hints of sexual assault, it actually gives us an attempted rape scene that serves no actual purpose other than to push forward the romance. When the two lovers finally do have sex we get treated to him just ramming it right in there, and in the heat of the moment she describes him as ‘going so deep she can feel him touching her womb’. ![]() Not to mention the moment where the word boob is actually used, in the middle of a sex scene, in a book, for adults. The words used to describe the characters' anatomy constantly change from dick to cock, and pussy to cunt making each sex scene jarring. There are not enough words to describe exactly how bad the sex scenes are. The whole big to-do about the millennium wolves showing up? She runs off and has a cry about her relationship - it doesn’t matter. ![]() Her worry over her dead friend Emily? One trip on a Ferris wheel, and one “panty dropping look” and it doesn’t matter. Her constant angst about having sex with him? One session of dry humping and it doesn’t matter. They meet, almost immediately he bites her, then they’re dry humping and she hates him, but then she loves him, then bam they’re “mated” story over all other subplots are forgotten. The plot can be summed up in one word : rushed. The spelling and grammar were terrible, I have to assume this was written with her eyes closed, and spell check off - there is no feasible way auto correct (even on an iPhone) wouldn’t catch at least some of these errors. God himself could not do enough to get me to read the rest of this series, or the rest of this author’s work.
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